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Martes, Hulyo 9, 2013

The Story About 2 Girls and a Boy

This is my first post here in this blog. Above picture is the illustration of our teacher in the lesson about simple, compound, complex and compound-complex sentences so that we can understand the lesson very well without confusion.



The story is about a girl who is always alone. Meryl is independent and can stand on herself alone. Then one day, she met a girl, Precious. They became friends because they have the same traits and characteristics. Then one day, Meryl met a boy. They also became friends but  Precious became mad to Meryl because Meryl gave all her time to the boy. The boy knew what is happening so the boy talked to the girls so Von solved their problem and Von, Precious, and Meryl became friends and they live happily ever after.





27 komento:

  1. The story is beautiful. And there is an introduction first before the Story.

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  2. the story is good but it is a bit short

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  3. The story is good...I like the ending..hahahahaha

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  4. Its nice but.... The girl two got mad on girl one.. so.. how is it that the the girl"s" and the boy became friends?

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  5. It was nice but some parts were a little confusing...but anyway good job!!

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  6. I agree with alyssa,the story was a little bit confusing.

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  7. Try to put names, haha. And the font size, too. It's not that readable. :)

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  8. Nice story, but the font size is too small

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  9. Nice story! Just make the font size larger!

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  10. the story is brief and nice but it has small font size.

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  11. Gotta love the characters. (; Nice story, but there a few grammatical errors.

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  12. Nice job, Ashley! xD It's good but i think it is a little short. Keep it up! :)

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  13. Good choice of names. xD
    Nice Story. I'm sure Meryl will love this. xD

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