This is my first post
here in this blog. Above picture is the illustration of our teacher in the
lesson about simple, compound, complex and compound-complex sentences so that
we can understand the lesson very well without confusion.
The story is about a
girl who is always alone. Meryl is independent and can stand on herself alone.
Then one day, she met a girl, Precious. They became friends because they have
the same traits and characteristics. Then one day, Meryl met a boy. They also became
friends but Precious became mad to Meryl because Meryl gave all her time
to the boy. The boy knew what is happening so the boy talked to the girls so
Von solved their problem and Von, Precious, and Meryl became friends and they
live happily ever after.

The story is beautiful. And there is an introduction first before the Story.
TumugonBurahinthe story is good but it is a bit short
TumugonBurahinThe story is good...I like the ending..hahahahaha
TumugonBurahinneeds names for characters
TumugonBurahinIts nice but.... The girl two got mad on girl one.. so.. how is it that the the girl"s" and the boy became friends?
TumugonBurahinIt was nice but some parts were a little confusing...but anyway good job!!
TumugonBurahinI agree with alyssa,the story was a little bit confusing.
TumugonBurahinThe font size is too small .
TumugonBurahingood.....very good
TumugonBurahinTry to put names, haha. And the font size, too. It's not that readable. :)
TumugonBurahinnice
TumugonBurahinNice story, but the font size is too small
TumugonBurahinI can see the whole text
TumugonBurahinNice story! Just make the font size larger!
TumugonBurahinthe story is brief and nice but it has small font size.
TumugonBurahinGood Story!
TumugonBurahingood
TumugonBurahinGotta love the characters. (; Nice story, but there a few grammatical errors.
TumugonBurahinKeep up the good work dude ^^
TumugonBurahinnice
TumugonBurahinASHLEY. WATTA NAMES.
TumugonBurahinhehe
BurahinNice names
TumugonBurahinNice job, Ashley! xD It's good but i think it is a little short. Keep it up! :)
TumugonBurahinGood choice of names. xD
TumugonBurahinNice Story. I'm sure Meryl will love this. xD
The story is so cute...
TumugonBurahinNice story
TumugonBurahin